Hello everyone, as I had posted on Facebook, I’ve been thinking I would like very much to “crowd source” my current manuscript, much as I did with To Love as Aswang. I always need to get out of my own head, my own assumptions, expectations, and imagination. As I am writing about being a “lady,” about “beauty,” and being “pretty,” I want to know what other Pinays are thinking and feeling about these things.
I previously posted a first draft of what is now becoming a long prose poem, tentatively titled, “Lady.” Below are more excerpts and rewrites.
[ley-dee] noun, plural ladies. 1. a woman who is refined, polite, and well-spoken: A lady must always smile, wear a slip, cross her legs, and keep her hands in her lap. 2. a woman of high social position or economic class: A lady must always consider what colors will suit her complexion. A lady must always match her shoes and her purse. 3. any woman; female (sometimes used in combination): A lady must always be beautiful to look at, and she must always exercise self-control. Even a lady doctor must always remember her station. 4. (used in direct address: usually offensive in the singular): Ladies, you must always be graceful in your movements. Lady, you must always mind your tongue. 5. wife: A lady must always yield her will to men, and she must always offer to prepare the meal. 6. Slang. a female lover or steady companion. A lady must always guard her heart, but she must always graciously accept.
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A lady does not open her own doors. She does not voice her opinions or contradict. She does not frown, smirk, or slouch. She does not quarrel in public, place her needs before others, or perspire. She does not monopolize the conversation. She does not initiate or compete. A lady does not remove her shoes in public. She does not use her hands. She does not show her teeth. She does not laugh, shout, or scratch. She does not swear or smoke. She does not belch, fart, piss, or shit. She does not coordinate her own movement. A lady does not mind. A lady does not eat. A lady does not matter.
“When a bamboo reaches its highest peak it bends back down to the soil.” You must never slouch, ladies, though you must always bend. Elegant, effortless. Bend, slender, there, at the waist, cambré. To bend is an art. Allongé, let wind, let waves pass through the vertebrae and sway. Bend at the nape with grace. No matter the strain or weight, the truth is you must allay. And may your body be the haven they claim. “The bamboo bends; it does not break.” To break is coarse, it is classless and crass. It is common. A lady is not common. You must always save face; you must not let them see you break.
Things people say to you: Why must you be like this. Can’t you just please chill out. No one will want you. You suspect they are thinking: I don’t understand you. You scare me. It comes out like this instead: Smile. Girl, brush your hair. You crazy bitch. Why aren’t you married. You just need a man to _____. You could be pretty if _____. You should be more _____. You should be less _____. You aren’t _____ enough. Just shut up. You’re so dark.
OK, now it’s your turn. Please comment below. In addition to responses to what I have written above, here are prompts:
A lady must always _____.
A lady does not _____.
You just need a man to _____.
You could be pretty if _____.
You should be more _____.
You should be less _____.
You aren’t _____ enough.
The only requirements that I have are that you are Pinay-identified, that you include your real name (i.e. no screen names only, no anonymous) in your response comment below (and please, only in the comments below; I can’t manage any more emails), and that, as with To Love as Aswang, you are OK with my somehow incorporating your response into this growing long poem.
OK, go! Salamat po!